NightHawk77's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[how to make a game!]

Not bad

yeah, pretty good I guess. I am an AS beginner, so tutorials like these are awesome. Couple suggestions for another tutorial. When you visually teaching stuff, instead of drawing the whole flash interface (cause that did look a bit sloppy), just take screenshots and work from there. There was that one page full of actionscript that you simply copy and paste. Next time try and explain what that stuff does. The rest was explained good, but I need to know what everything does in order to move ahead. Copy and Pasting limits creativity if you don't know what the code is actually doing. Maybe clean up the way the tutorial flows, make it look a bit more professional. I think you mentioned that you will explain how to make games like Alien Hominid, which would be pretty kick ass. In your next tutorial be sure to include things like A.I. Generator, How to pick up weapons, level design, level progression, stuff like that. On a final note, good job and I will look foreward to the next tutorial.

ELFERRETO responds:

yea... but drawing is better because pictures make the filesize too big, draw everything and itll be small this is really a tutorial for n00bs so i didnt really explain it... they wont listen

[Abc Memory]

ehhhh

Uhh, I guess that was O K. Still, you could spice up the game just a little. That was pretty dull and un-original.

MindMan responds:

Its main purpose; to test your memory. Simplicity is the most important factor in this case.